Would have worked abit better if you used softer sounds..
somthing less harsh intrument wise would sound amazing on this track.
personaly i love the way the song comes back in about half way through and the drums worked realy nice. to be honest it was brilliantly written. The insruments are just abit too harsh sounding for the genre. Some more arps going on quietly would sound nice too as an afterthought.
Well done :)
I realy liked this.. i dont see why it has such a low score to be honest.
or tho the guitar and drums arent realy 8-bit still works realy nicely and moves along pretty flowingly. All in all good job. I realy liked the drum beat too.
I was a bit of an asshole and wrote some nasty critique on some people's boredom audiofap. That might be a reasonable(?) answer to the surprisingly low score. :)
after 2:11 it sounded realy nice... exept the bass sounds kinda wrong..
the main chord melody came in abit to early.. i liked the synth sound that accompanyed it at 3:14 however, this song needed a melody instead of just a chord sequence so it sounds kinda unfinished.. but overall not bad
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