Nice!

Very nice..
Would have worked abit better if you used softer sounds..
somthing less harsh intrument wise would sound amazing on this track.
personaly i love the way the song comes back in about half way through and the drums worked realy nice. to be honest it was brilliantly written. The insruments are just abit too harsh sounding for the genre. Some more arps going on quietly would sound nice too as an afterthought.
Well done :)

(y)

after 2:11 it sounded realy nice... exept the bass sounds kinda wrong..
the main chord melody came in abit to early.. i liked the synth sound that accompanyed it at 3:14 however, this song needed a melody instead of just a chord sequence so it sounds kinda unfinished.. but overall not bad

7/10
4/5